Jazz concert report revising and adding more content

Please see attached file. I have already finished 3 pages and a half. Please add more content. Make sure the bulk content part has to be 3 pages or more and the whole report has to be at least 5 pages and a half. Please also revise grammar/construction mistake to make it more coherent and fluent. Use some word in the word list if needed. Here is the link of the piece: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tlC6_hE5x-A&list=PL521F35728DA4C246&index=3