REVISE paper on culture and identity. Culture of American Work

Document attached has the full paper. You will see that there are highlight things. Yellow is for the professors words–comments she inserted, or words she added/changed. Turquoise is for the original words: the things she is referring to. Sometimes she highlights words in turquoise without comments; that means there is some problem with those words–an error, or another example of things she already talked about. On the last page, is where she gets into more detail of what needs to be revised.