The revision of the essay about the future of humanity

This essay is from my Technology and Human Values Class, a kind of Philosophy Class. The essay required to write about some information about human’s future that I learned from two movies, Wall-E and Elysium. Also, relate these two movies to a article named The Future of Humanity by Nick Bostrom to write this essay, and compare the opinions from this article with the opinions from those two movies. Then, write some personal opinions about those two movies and the article. For this time, I need you help me to improve my essay with my teacher’s suggestions, please finish it as soon as u can, this is a emergent work.