Content Restructuring/Editing Required for Topic- Different Engineering Majors for Students

I’ve got an article (about 1500 words) that needs to be edited/added new sentences to make it more engaging for engineering students and be corrected for better sentence structuring. Editors will be given complete freedom to edit the article as they please. I just want the content to be factually relevant and improved structurally to make it more interesting for engineering readers. The article needs not only editing but also better sentence phrasing to convince students. Can you do it? Please find attached the article… Looking forward…