Do self-disclosure and intimacy affect your weight management in a relationship

Please read carefully. I’ve already done my paper completely. I’m looking for help with grammar, flow, and transitions from one section to the other. Also i’m open to suggestions as long as it helps. My teacher failed the last paper i got, so i’m really looking for someone who can help, not just take my money. If you think the topic would be better with one or the other, I’m also interested in why and suggestions on changing it