statement of purpose for Baruch School, Masters in Financial Engineering

Hi, I am applying for a Masters in Financial Engineering in Baruch School , New York. I have to submit an essay which should answer the following questions.. 1. Why are you interested in Financial Engineering? 2. Why do you want to study in the Masters in Financial Engineering Program at Baruch College? 3. What career path do you envision after graduating from the Baruch MFE Program? I have already prepared a statement, but that had to be moulded and some bit of research also needs to be done to get the best results. I would like to hire someone who has an expertise in Finance, who know exactly what a financial engineering program is and is able to do the research independently. Please find the statement I have written attached. Thank you.